As Jimmy was walking in a sunny day in a park, I heard this loud screaming. A group of people running furiously. People screamed, “You're going the wrong way!” Then the weather changed dramatically; a big black cloud charging towards the city. Heavy rain and gale force wind. It was like a nightmare but I could feel the temperature rushing through my skin. The wind was pushing me like a paper. I ran as fast as I can to the nearest house. Rain was turning into white, hard, big hail. A big tornado formed. I thought that I would die. Suddenly…
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