This is a poem about Maddy in the 6.3 magnitude earthquake. Our success criteria was to create a poem using Adjectives Noun Verb Chart (A.N.V) to describe the scene and the situation of a Character in the novel. I hope enjoy reading my poem.
The earthquake was big enough.
It had made a hole in the roof and made liquefaction all round.
The yucky liquefaction is rising.
A scary crack in my room falling apart.
The the violent earthquake shaking.
The Sticky liquefaction started moving like a landslide.
I was scared like my sister with tears as we cried.
My little red heart beating fast as light.
Hi Ang
ReplyDeleteThis memoir poem reflects careful crafting of your Adjectives, Nouns and verbs to build a picture of the situation and scene
Please add more info to your description to explain exactly what you had to do
ReplyDeleteHi Angelo,
You did a good blog post.
What book did you read ?
You should add why you did it.
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.
To Angelo
ReplyDeleteThis piece of writing is very griping, you did a great job of describing what was going on in the situation and how they were feeling.Some thing that I found is that some of the words didn't make sense. But other than that you did a great job. have you finished your book yet?
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ReplyDeleteHi Ang
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem on the Canterbury quake it is really descriptive and makes my heart beat on that cliff hanger you wrote I am so tempted to find out what happens next great story.
Flynn
Room 4
Year 7
Drummond Primary School