Sunday, 15 August, Sunny, bright. I was hanging with Maddy in her house. Maddy decided to make cupcakes. Maddy’s Brother (Jackson) kept following us everywhere. I got a text from my Mum that I could stay longer but Maddy’s Mum and Dad were still shopping. When they came back Maddy said, “See Mum. There’s a good reason to have a cell phone. Laura’s Mum can contact her if plans change.” I put a candle on one of the cupcakes and sang happy birthday. After I gave Maddy a present for her 12 year old birthday. We played our favorite songs.
I am a student at Drummond School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 31 July 2017
100 Word Challenge
This is my 2 out of 5 100 Word Challenge, this is about Laura, Maddy's friend. This is about Maddy's birthday. Our success criteria was to be a character in the novel in a scene. I hope you enjoy reading my story.
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
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3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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I am learning to write a piece of prose a sketch with detailed words, about a particular place, that is very important to me like Philippin...
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This is a poem about Maddy in the 6.3 magnitude earthquake. Our success criteria was to create a poem using Adjectives Noun Verb Chart (A....
Hi angelo
ReplyDeletenice novel study story What was your favourite part?
Cormac
Drummond Primary school
Hi Angelo,
ReplyDeleteGreat Novel study really interesting book by the sound of it
Flynn
Room 4
Drummond Primary School