Monday 19 June 2017

The Egg

This week we had to write about a picture which there was a construction people and a cream egg. 
The Egg
Once upon a time there was a black giant goose. The giant goose lad a chocolate cream egg in New York City. Pop. Cars crashing, people screaming. The terrified goose flapped her wings furiously. The construction workers came and dropped cones on the road. As a construction worker climbed the egg suddenly there cracks started to form. As he jumped, he was too late. He was already in the egg. One construction worker tasted the yoke of the egg and it tasted like  cream. He called people to eat the tasty egg. As people ate the egg, it got smaller
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  1. Anonymous28 June 2017 at 09:53

    Hello,Angelo

    I found this story very interesting and funny how there is a big creme egg that people can eat,and I find this story very descriptive because there were words like terrified and furiously.

    Cameron, Room 6
    Oamaru Intermediate

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