Thursday 14 September 2017
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Angelo
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing - you should be proud of this piece . I like the way you worked so hard to create the story map. Would you recommend anybody else in the class reads this novel? Well done
Hi Angelo,
ReplyDeleteYou did an ok blog post.
I liked you did your story map from a bird's perspective.
This reminds me when I do novel study each year.
Is there sequel to the book?
Maybe you should post why you did because people will wonder why and you should put the title book with novel study in too.
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.
Hello Angelo,
ReplyDeleteAwesome slide. I like how you added pictures on every slide. Looks like a good book! Next time add a catchy title on your blog post to draw people in.
Keep up the good work.
Prudence,
Yaldhurst Model School
hello angelo
ReplyDeleteAwesome slide. I like how you added pictures on every slide. Looks like a good book! Next time add a catchy title on your blog post to draw people in.
Keep up the good work.
Carlyn
drummond
Hello Angelo
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 5 student at Yaldhurst Model School ( YMS For short).
Well let's get on with the comment
I really liked the villain cacher, Why do you think that the thing you made will catch that villian? is it made exactly for them or can it catch any villain? Why will it do this?
I also liked your puzzle it looked really fun to make
was the picture on the puzzle your favorite carter?
Do you think it was made to a good standard?
Do you think it looked a lot like the carter in the book?
Did you copy from a pitcher or did you do it from what you think he looked like?
Maybe next time use a cool title that will draw people in and make them want to read it like the avengers of reading or The book of ... click hare to learn more
Have a great day if you get time come check out my blog goodbye
my comment in spanish
Hola angelo
Mi nombre es Maddison Soy un estudiante del año 5 en Yaldhurst Model School (YMS para abreviar).
Bueno, vamos a seguir con el comentario
Me gustó mucho el cacher villano, ¿Por qué crees que lo que hiciste atrapará a ese villano? ¿se hace exactamente para ellos o puede atrapar a cualquier villano? ¿Por qué va a hacer esto?
También me gustó tu rompecabezas parecía muy divertido de hacer
Cuál fue la imagen en el rompecabezas de su carretero favorito?
¿Crees que fue hecho a un buen nivel?
¿Crees que se parecía mucho al carter del libro?
¿Usted copió de un lanzador o usted lo hizo de lo que usted piensa que él parecía?
Quizás la próxima vez utilice un título fresco que atraiga a la gente y que quiera leerla como los vengadores de la lectura o el libro de ... click hare para saber más
Tenga un gran día si tiene tiempo para venir a ver mi blog adiós
mi comentario en españo